You have great ideas, and this helps with the exchange at the end of this POV scene, which I wasn’t crazy about.
Thank you, and that’s also what good crit partners are for. I work with you kids the same way I work with Stacey Kade, and she with me. We toss ideas back and forth, sometimes the nuttier the better.
It’s simply (and sadly) easier to see someone else’s work that your own. I know I KNOW my work too well, my characters too well, I’m just too close to the scene. That’s why putting your pages DOWN for two weeks also helps a lot. Work on something else. Then go back and read. Guarantee you’ll have some ah-hahs…
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