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Vicki Briner
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Hi Rebecca,

Thanks for the comments and suggestions, particularly about the female character’s introduction. It’s a good suggestion to have him think about how she might contribute to his goal/mission. I’ve waffled about the paragraph where he reflects on her sneakers. I added it for a reason—although now I don’t remember what that was, but think it makes him seem a little obnoxious.

Thanks again!

Vicki

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