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Lisa Coy
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I can’t believe that I forgot to say the police were at her house. Thank you for finding holes and showing where to cut dialogue and add her thoughts and emotions. I was concerned about pacing at the cost of internal thoughts and feelings. I think every fiction writer should learn this genre. It really takes you out of your comfort zone. Thanks for being patient with me.

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