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Brenda Nelson-Davis
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Hey Rebecca,

I’m late to the game, but I’m working on the homework for lesson 6. I thought this opening was incredible, something I’d read in a heartbeat. (I love MG and YA). I tried to find something in the specificity and credibility check not mentioned much in other comments , but that struck me as credible and that is the narrator’s short sentence fragments that are reactions to the Bald Guy and the uniforms. I found them credible because they resemble inner thoughts, and really work for MG/ YA genres. 🙂

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