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Jessica Jayne
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Hi Zara, I reviewed Chapter 14 and 15. Really didn’t have anything to add to Chapter 14. Your writing is so crisp and to the point. I left a few comments/questions in Chapter 15, but also really well written. 🙂

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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