Congratulations on the good news, Zara!
I’m curious, when you use Autocrit, what reports are you using? I got a six-month promotional subscription, but when that’s over, I’m not sure it’s worth $30/month. I find it a chore to sift through the things it flags since it doesn’t consider context, dialogue, etc.
Anyway, here is Chapter 17. It’s good. I left only a few comments.
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