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Ana Morgan
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Sweet chapter…She wins her father over pretty easily.

I hope you don’t take offense, but I can’t help but wonder if she should have to fight for her right to have a true love–even to the point of threatening to trade her family for true love. She’s worried all her life about meeting her parents’ expectations. That all her beliefs can be erased by a single, gentle conversation seems to belittle her original fears.

Ana

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