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Ana Morgan
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Brilliant assessment, Vicki! Great options. Mia’s dad could go through them systematically–he’s a shrewd trial lawyer. Mia could recognize his tactics even as she recognizes they are based in deep paternal love and concern for her and their Serbian heritage.

One possibility is Mia doesn’t reconcile with her father right away. What if she thinks (for a chapter or two) that she has to choose between her father’s love and her love for Ke? Her father will come around, of course, admit he’s wrong when he sees how happy she is with Ke. Her father wants her to be happy above all.

Ana

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