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Jessica Jayne
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So I’ve put myself on a deadline to get this book published this year! 2020 will not stop me! 🙂

I cannot thank you enough for your feedback and suggestions on this chapter. Please take a look and let me know if this scene works better. I actually think it will assist with the direction of the next two chapters. This argument with her father throws her off a bit and the distance between her and Kekoa is hard – so Chapter Twenty-Three will make so much more sense.

Look forward to the feedback.

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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