Hi Zara, Congratulations on your editor’s review for Angel/Devil. I’m also enjoying the other books you have published. Nice touch adding in the personalized bookmarks and Amazon review information. Smart marketing. Thank you for the critique of chapter 3. Having it combined with Ana’s worked better for my revision. Less going back and forth. I ordered the Emotion Thesaurus and waiting for it to come in the mail. Starting to see easier where I’m telling and showing in later chapters. Agent Irene Goodman told me the same thing, but I didn’t understand until you explained it line by line. I wish I held off shopping DG around. Lucky for me, I only sent to three agents and then found this group.