Reply To: Lisa Warren Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Warren › Reply To: Lisa Warren August 5, 2020 at 9:55 pm #43146 Zara WestParticipant Hi Lisa, Here is my feedback on CH 4. I think rewriting and resubmitting is a great idea. I don’t mind rereading. I always find something new to pick at. Zara Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.