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Vicki Briner
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Happy Friday!

First, thank you so much Ana, Zara, Jessica and Lisa for your suggestions and for holding me to higher standards. Your help has made my story so much stronger, and I appreciate every single comment/suggestion.

Here’s the next chapter. I’m a little iffy about this one. It’s short, but I’m worried there’s too much internality. I don’t want the overall pace to come to a screeching halt, but I also know that nonstop action is tiring for the reader. So….I’m curious to hear your thoughts.

Thanks again!

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