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Jessica Jayne
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Zara, Thank you. It is amazing how changing a few words and a few areas can totally alter the emotional experience. I appreciate your insight and advice. And I do cherish the compliments. 🙂 You’ve influenced me greatly this year on the deeper POV. I try not to have the Emotional Thesaurus too far away. 🙂

As for your question about why Ke hasn’t said I love you yet…he didn’t want to say it before she left because it might be too soon. And he doesn’t want the first time he says it to be on the phone. He wants to say it in person. Hint: he’s headed to Ohio in the next chapter so I think you’ll be pleased to know those three words make an appearance. 🙂

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
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