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Vicki Briner

Here’s my next chapter. I think it needs a better ending hook.

Just a note, I know when you use words from another language, the standard has been to italicize. I was recently told this is no longer in favor because it denotes “other.” I’m not sure if that’s correct, but at any rate, I’ve not italicized any of the Spanish phrases in the book.

I look forward to your feedback.


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