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Jessica Jayne
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Appreciated the suggestions and recommendations on Chapter Twenty-Three. I spent some time revising the chapter using a combination of everyone’s suggestions. Thank you.

I’m attaching Chapter Twenty-four for your review. Kekoa comes for her. I love this scene so I do want to get it as close to perfect as possible. I’m a pantser type writer, so I do not outline my entire books in excruciating detail and often times write my chapters out of order. This chapter had come to me early in the writing process. It’s been revised several times based on how the chapters before ebbed and flowed, but I really wanted this to be strong, emotional and real. I appreciate any and all feedback.

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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