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Lisa Coy
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New characters. Chaska is really a girl and reads poetry, so her dialogue may seem flowery for the boy she is pretending to be. Even though this chapter is Rudy’s POV, he is a secondary character. Do I need to go into as deep of POV as I do with the protagonist? Or is there wiggle room there?

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