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Ana Morgan
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I tore into this chapter, Jessica, because it’s pivotal. First Ke’s commits to a lifetime of love in a sex scene. Then he meets Mia’s family. Every reader will relate to this–the scary meet the future in-laws.

As always, use what works.

Ana

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