Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions August 23, 2020 at 3:52 pm #43506 Lisa CoyParticipant Good chapter, and thank you for taking the time to show me how to build tension with the train attack scene. Much appreciated. Just a few comments on ch 25. Loved the beginning. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.