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Jessica Jayne

Good Evening! I apologize for falling a bit behind in my critiques the last two weeks. A lot has been happening – one of which is trying to get this book to my editor in early September. Plus, my kids started back to school – virtually. Two thirteen year olds in eighth grade and an eleven year old in sixth. Let’s just say my memory of math (my favorite subject was English) is not very good. 🙂 And on top of all this, two weeks ago, my company restructured. So as part of the management team, I’ve been working with several new members on my team and though exciting, it’s been exceptionally chaotic. I will be working through critiques this weekend between my RWA sessions. 🙂

Thank you Ana and Vicki for critique of Chapter Twenty-Five. Your feedback was invaluable. I’m attaching Chapter Twenty-Six for your review and thoughts. I’m getting close to the end here. 🙂

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary


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