Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jessica Jayne submissions › Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions August 28, 2020 at 5:19 pm #43572 Vicki BrinerParticipant Hi Jessica, Here’s your latest chapter. Good reconciliation. I made some suggestions for tightening of wording. Thanks for your comments on my last chapter. Good observations. The feedback is appreciated. Vicki Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.