Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions August 31, 2020 at 10:15 pm #43596 Ana MorganParticipant Vicki, I noted several places where I wished for more in-the-moment explanation of why Elise was feeling the way she did. Miranda is an interesting character! Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.
