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Zara West
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Hi Lisa,

Here are some comments on CH 6. Faye’s character is developing nicely. I got hung up on train compartments and Pullmans and how many people fit in a sleeping compartment. Any way,  it took me longer than usual. use what is helpful.

Zara

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