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Jessica Jayne
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Thank you, Vicki, Ana and Kathleen (welcome!)! Appreciate the feedback. All very good points and your thoughts have been an integral part of this story becoming the best it can be.

I’m attaching chapter twenty-seven for review.

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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