Hi Vicki, Thank you for your help with chapter 7. My attempt to build up Faye and stay true to her character is challenging. Chaska overshadows her later on, so I started throwing stuff at Chaska –like murdering Niya’s abusive father and other serious flaws. In a few more chapters, Faye saves them, but she is still kind of milk-toast. What do you do when you don’t really like your own protagonist?