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Pepper North

Homework for Lesson 1

I’ve adapted a scene from the beginning of a novel where the 22-year-old heroine has just been transported to her destined mate, a sorcerer of great power and vastly longer life span.  It’s not as I would normally write it.  My assumption is that this would have to be a short exchange.


“Welcome, Scarlett.”

Her eyes flashed up from the marble flooring that had appeared under her feet and instantly, she felt all her muscles tense.  “Who are you?

“I am Remo.“

She waited for this gigantic man to say more.  Silence filled the oversized room.  “Send me back.”



“Your fate is here.”

“That’s crap.  I don’t believe in fate.”

“You will learn.”


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