Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Jessica Jayne submissions › Reply To: Jessica Jayne submissions September 5, 2020 at 4:35 pm #43710 Vicki BrinerParticipant Just when we thought the conflict was finished. 🙂 I made lots of suggestions. Ignore anything and everything that doesn’t feel right. And thanks for the critique on my last chapter. Several good suggestions. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.