Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions September 6, 2020 at 7:42 am #43715 Ana MorganParticipant great chapter, Vicki. I love how you wrote her inner feelings. I wonder, though, if how you wrote his feelings is a bit too similar. He’s a guy. ex-military. He’s tough. Ana Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.