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Allie Pleiter
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“As did I.” He cocked his head. “You and I are not so very different.”

“That’s where you’re wrong.” Neala pointed the tip of her sword toward the trail. “I would die before joining the Viken.”

LeAnne-

To me, above is the point in this scene where you could use the regression tactic, because they move from inquiry to conflict. You could try something like:

“As did I.” He cocked his head. “You survived. I survived. We are not so very different.”

“Wrong.” Neala shot back. She pointed the tip of her sword toward the trail. “Joining the Viken? I would die before I did that. Die.”

It’s a subtle shift, but enough to let us see how these two have a lot of water to cross between them.

–Allie

Allie Pleiter
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