“Just say “Hello Kitty.”
This is a witty scene–I laughed out loud several times. And you do a great job of set-up and rhythm required to pull off a great punch line. The premise sounds filled with great opportunities to show off your talent with humor.
My only comment is that I don’t read any stress in this scene. It reads more like witty banter than any regression (despite the child-like nature of Hello Kitty). Are they in any danger? Is she using humor to diffuse or cope with a threat? If so, then give us a few hints in internal dialogue or action.
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