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Allie Pleiter
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Ruchama-

This version is indeed much clearer. You bring up an excellent point–dialogue tags become a necessity when dialogue is between more than two people (or sometimes even when a third or more persons are being discussed). The line is still vivid…but yes, make sure your readers are certain to whom/about whom such a great line is being delivered!

–Allie

Allie Pleiter
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