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Allie Pleiter
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“You call this nothing, Bubba? What about this dazzling light show. It’s down-right nice out here. Romantic even.”

Jan

An excellent use of the tactic. From “Bubba,” we can assume it’s a southern setting. And you’ve told us were at night, outside under a starry sky, delivered from someone who would like things to get romantic. Yes, you could have taken a paragraph to set the scene, but you’ve done it in under 20 words. Well done!

–Allie

Allie Pleiter
Author - Speaker - Coach
www.alliepleiter.com

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