He stepped closer. “If Eire is no longer the home of honorable warriors and a proud people, then do it. Slit my throat now and be done with it for I’ve had enough of living with heathens.”
Loads of information delivered here! We know it’s Ireland and historical, we know it’s a man of the homeland returned with perhaps a shaky assessment of what he’s found, we know he values honor and isn’t afraid of death. And he’s in the middle of a conflict with a knife to his throat. Great work–this definitely packs a scene-setting punch.
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