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Vicki Briner
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Thank you for the feedback, Lisa. You are not the first person to mention Eric taking his time getting to Elise when she falls. I’ve modified it from my original to try to show his frustration, but I may need to look at it again. Perhaps a retort from her before she runs off would be a good solution.

My dad used to watch Moonlighting. I think I was in elementary school and middle school when it was on. What I mostly remember is that Bruce Willis had hair. 😁

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