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Jessica Jayne
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Here’s Chapter Twenty-Seven, Vicki. Great chapter. Just a few suggestions to deepen the POV. These are both very personal scenes. Loved it.

Jessica Jayne
Sexy Stories with Heart
FTHRW Secretary

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