Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Vicki Briner Submissions › Reply To: Vicki Briner Submissions September 14, 2020 at 5:33 pm #43859 Jessica JayneParticipant Here’s Chapter Twenty-Seven, Vicki. Great chapter. Just a few suggestions to deepen the POV. These are both very personal scenes. Loved it. Jessica Jayne Sexy Stories with Heart FTHRW Secretary Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.