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Allie Pleiter
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Jan

This excerpt shows an important element in the blurting tactic: you should set it up with a contradiction. Just like Hermione’s leading-up-to-a-kiss actions in the Harry Potter example I gave us, your character says something that contradicts the truth right before she blurts it out. That gives the admission more punch, and helps the reader see through to the truth.  Well done!

–Allie

Allie Pleiter
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