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Ana Morgan
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I think you have great Rudy POV in the first section. I noted several places in the 2nd half where you could add more internal reaction.

I also noted some historical questions. You’ve obviously done your research, but you may want to double check some details. I am married to a farmer who’s father grew up on a farm in Iowa in the 1920s.

Ana

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