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Vicki Briner
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I have a handful of short, one-scene chapters in this part of the book, so I’ve put two together here (no page break). There are two things I’m curious about. In Ch. 30 I have a flashback, which I start in past perfect, but switch quickly into regular past tense. I want to make sure it works and also that the transition back to present is smooth and clear. The second thing is the ending of Ch. 31. I know I need something more dramatic, but don’t have any ideas, which makes me wonder how necessary the scene actually is.

I’m looking forward to your feedback. Thanks!

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