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Kathleen Sheridan
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Hello!

It has taken me some time to get the confidence to share, but here goes! I am sending a query letter and 1-sentence pitch for my novel, Rescue in the Highlands. 

I underlined one sentence in the query letter that I am debtaing erasing: it confused one friend, but I think it may be necessary to differentiate between the two chieftains mentioned in the query. You’ll see what I mean 🙂

I also put 2 options for a 1-sentence pitch, and would love your feedback about which one is stronger, or what could make it stronger.

Thank you!!

Kathleen

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