Thanks for sharing. I love historical romance, and this one sounds interesting. Since this is basically a cover letter, you really want to sell your story and choose words that will get more bang for the buck—less is more. I left some examples of how I would write parts of this letter, although that doesn’t mean it’s right for you. I’ve written a few cover letters with some success, but there are certainly others in the group with more experience at this than me.
Good luck with your query. I hope you find this useful.
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