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Lisa Coy
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Hi Vicki, I loved chapter 30 and I thought how you worded his looking back was very smooth. Chapter 31 was good, but I thought her brother should be more concerned at the beginning and that their conversation ended too abruptly. I know you want to leave the reader wanting more so they turn the page. It definitely did that.

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