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Ana Morgan
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I am doing the (hopefully) final polish for Trust Me, (old title Ammi Folkright). I’d appreciate any feedback. Does it start with solid action and effectively spell out the story problem? Are the main characters introduced well? Is the flow of action-reaction believable? Any places that would benefit from more deep POV?

TIA,

Ana

 

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