Thanks Ana, Zara, and Vicki for guidance on chapter 9. I learned my characters cannot time travel when I change POV. I think Vicki’s suggestion will help me save the bath scene. Ana taught me shouting on Facebook is different than shouting in a novel. And Zara’s critiques are like taking a Masterclass. My biggest fear is losing any of you before my book is finished. I’m not kidding. Every critique is like Christmas. Like what a fix of crack or cocaine must be for a junkie. Y’all rock!