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Zara West
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Hi Ana,

Happy to read this again. The first chapter was new – I must have missed it before. Made a lot of picky comments as usual. But found nothing major. The action and story problem are clear. I still have some issues with her overblown fear of genetic inheritance of schizophrenia which is a very tiny chance, also the onset can be much later in women than men – more toward the thirties, but we already hashed that one about.

Love the new title.

Zara

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