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Ana Morgan
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Thank you, Vicki! I love how you challenge me to write better. I will go back and layer in more visceral reactions for Galen. You are right, it would be better to soften Franco a bit; that would make his villain-ness more shocking for the reader when the truth is revealed. Ana

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