Reply To: Zara West Submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Zara West Submissions › Reply To: Zara West Submissions December 18, 2020 at 12:57 pm #44966 Lisa CoyParticipant Good beginning, Zara. It wasn’t distracting not knowing the other characters from other books. Made a few comments. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.
