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Vicki Briner
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Hi Todd,

With track changes, the copy and pasting didn’t work very well, so I’m attaching two docs. One with my beginning edits. One where I only commented on the last scene. I like the story concept. I think it works. I’ve made several suggestions, but nothing major. Ignore anything that doesn’t feel right for you.

Vicki

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