Reply To: Lisa Warren Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Lisa Warren › Reply To: Lisa Warren January 11, 2021 at 9:04 pm #46623 Victoria ElliotParticipant Hi Lisa, Sorry I was a little slow with this one. I thought the scene with the kiss was some of your strongest writing yet. I will try to get to Ch. 18 in the next couple of days. Vicki Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.