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January 13, 2021 at 11:00 pm
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This is an area I need to work on. I tend not to show how my character is feeling or use overly-used words like “smiled,” “nodded,” gulped” and gasped rather than take the time to go deeper and find other way to show what the character is feeling or how the character is reacting and why.
Jeanne