Hi, Zara!
Thank you for your offer to look at a setting or scene we have revised. I’m not at that point yet in my revision; may I take a rain check on that offer?
Jeanne
Of course. You can send it anytime up to a month after the course to me personally. Or may I suggest you join the FTHRW critique group of which I am a member. We are a wonderful bunch of fellow writers, all with the same goal of writing the best we can.
I have been in many critique groups, including some high-powered ones, and this one is the best.
Zara