Reply To: Todd McGee submissions Home › Forums › Critique Forum › Todd McGee submissions › Reply To: Todd McGee submissions January 28, 2021 at 3:21 pm #46927 Todd McGeeParticipant I’m going backward. This is a mostly new Chapter 6. One scene is a holdover, but the first and last scenes are new. I’m trying to amp up the tension between Milly and Tim in this chapter. Attachments:You must be logged in to access attached files.